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My Last Symphony

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Music: Beethoven - Virus
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"It's up to you, whether you want to accept your talent as a gift,  or a curse"
Raven's master final words before he died on his hand.
After his master death, Raven composed a Symphony in memorial his master. One last Symphony before he stopped playing violin. One last Symphony before the war.

Ps: Raven talent is forbidden magic.
Raven is a powerful forbidden magic user, but he can't stabilize his power. Therefore, chaos happened everytime he used his  magic. He used to abandon his training because he afraid of hurting others. After his  master death, he start to practice his magic seriously, and leaving what he love the most, playing violin.

After seeing lion's anatomy, Raven's hand supposed to be has 5 fingers.... i should remake his ref sheet soon before i make terrible mistakes OTL


I got problem with my lappy, slow lappy is super slowww. I hope it get better soon. Drawing this took me soooo long TT^TT
Feel free to drop feedbacks to help me improve ^^

Raven belongs to me, from my old project Fantasy Animals.

Stock brush:
Star Brushes

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other works:
Asleep by fireytikaWelcome~ by fireytikaUnderground Paradise [C] by fireytika Be My Knight by fireytika
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Positive:
- Dynamic composition that guides the eye very well.
- Pretty good color scheme
- Attention to detail.

Negative:
- Shading is very smudgy. Try to really work on giving fabric the right texture; the underside of the cape looks a bit blotchy, which is a shame because higher up the folds look nice.
Also; something flying in the air does not cast a shadow on said air, like the paper sheets are doing.
- Making the fringe locks move more dynamically, more like real hair, would improve a lot, I think.
- Shading the face a bit more. It looks rather flat compared to the rest now.

Overall:
Absolutely not bad. I like the idea and while there are some things you could work on, it's still a pretty strong piece.