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Aluca Halloween

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//UPDATE: edit on her eyes & effect//

For Artist-Fantasia  Alohaween event
31st Oct is Aluca's birthday~ It's time to wear pretty clothes while trick or treat~What is she cosplaying now, a vampire? a reaper? why not both XD
Ironically she hates vampires~ =v=

3 dolls on the left is her RP friends :
Li's Cata-nee
Almonde's FloDoodling 
Eiko's Eirlysie 
Aaanddd of course wild shadow bunnies appeared!  Can you find them all? XD

Feel free to give me feedbacks to help me improve ^^
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I was going to animate this, but I'm afraid i won't made it on time XD
perhaps i will continue it after graduation ceremony LOL


[C] Pine garden by fireytika Greenhouse by fireytika Stargazing by fireytika Aluca - AF by fireytika Broken chain by fireytika 


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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

hello :3
leaving you a critique in behalf of <img class="avatar group" width="100" height="50" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/p/r/p…" alt=":iconprojectcomment:" title="ProjectComment" />

I gotta congratulate you on this picture first of all. It's stunning!
And the colors pop which is not to be taken lightly with such a spooky pic <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title=";) (Wink)"/>

I'll start my in-depth with the lovely Aluca <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>
I don't know much about her background, so excuse that lack of knowledge XD
First of all, I love the outfit you created for her! The pearls, the lace, the gems, the chains, the frills, the ribbons! The details are amazing. And more importantly, despite the bounty of them, they don't clash. Your composition skills are on point!
Her hair is also beautiful and shaded nicely (not to mention the hair style! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>).
I have a bit of trouble though making out where her second leg is hiding. I'm sure it's there, just it's a bit too busy to pin point it. I also keep thinking that we should be able to see her right ear partially or some sort of ear lobe peeking out at least.

now to the rest of the image.
I love how oyu added in the RP partners as dolls. This is so creative! And they are super cute.
the background is kept simple, and I'm glad about that since the foreground is detailed enough <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/> Maybe even omit the little bit of lineart in the background <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/> I think that would help it even more <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>
The clouds are stunning as well :3
The one advice I would give oyu, is to look up how to shade metal. I am not quite sold on the scythe <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/> you are on point wiht the white and very dark grey, but the light effect is too blended. Metal reflects light in sharply defined areas and personally I would whink a curve alongside the blade would look nicer than a light effect vertical to it. but that depends on how you planned the lighting <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>

overall amazing piece of art!